I had a lot of trouble with the third guy in line, namely that he appeared to be leering at the gal in front of him.
This might be appropriate to a pulp fiction story, but he was intended to be just lusting after chili like the rest of them. But no matter how I worked over it, trying to control his eye direction and everything, the strong impression remained that he was thinking about young women, not chili.
The original pencil sketch was somehow not so obviously lecherous. As intended, this guy is just crazed with chili envy, or so it seems to me. But I couldn't seem to translate this into color.
My solution? I changed him into this: a man with a pathetic look, rather like the preacher from the HBO series
Deadwood. But at least the girl is out of danger!
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